A Pregnant Dream Comments

EMO
I think that the concept behind this project was good, but it didn't seem like you had any white balance set. Also it doesn't seem like the audio was taken well. I had to turn the computer all the way up in order to hear what was actually being said in the movie. It was also very pixelated, which i found distracting. Other than that i like the narrative qualities of the movie. Theres a scene in the middle where you were holding a baby that i think comes .. any real instances to your dream happens. It throws me off, and i personally think that if it is needed then it should be added to the end. Other than these things i think that it was entertaining and i really like that you approached the subject matter with a narrative.


SHAMROCK
ok. I like the fact you added more "cut to" scenes of the twisting and turning in bed. this will make viewers understand what ur trying to do more so than just using it a couple of times like you did b4.

-next there's a scene of you holding the baby towards the beginning of those twisting and turning scenes and I'm thinking you just overlooked that piece. If you didn't then that's what it looks like.

-the way you switched up the order of the scenes,locker and party, makes everything shorter and to the point

- i'm glad you took out the baby scene at the end because it didn't seem to fit. the scenery seemed like a hospital but the fake baby was killing me and so was the dialogue, but I didn't really know what you were going for.

- the way it cuts off with you crying makes this movie seem like it was portraying a sad story. or that it was portraying a sad situation and if that was what you were going for then that's what feeling I was left with at the end


CHELSEA
I really liked this one better. I thought it conveyed the idea better than the first one. good job