October 2 Edit

After receiving feedback from fellow classmates and 5 other artists (Shameka, Chelsea, Justin, Kamikka, Chris), I rearranged my content in order to create a new narrative. It is very choppy which I figured would add to the obserity of the piece. I deleted scenes that were irreverent and tried to trim down the piece from 8mins to 3mins. The feedback was very helpful as far as future camera options, set recommendations, etc. I will correct these issues in my next piece!